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| A song I wrote; -gasp- | |
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| Topic Started: Apr 25 2009, 04:08 AM (117 Views) | |
| Pheonix | Apr 25 2009, 04:08 AM Post #1 |
 
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So yeah I was bored and wrote this earlier tonight: Archenemy You You are my… You are my… You are my enemy! You are the one The one who thwarts my every move! Whatever I do, wherever I go You are always there to stop me You are always the one who’s always there! Always one step ahead, always on my trail! I love all the things you hate You hate all the things I love Whatever my plan may be, you always have the solution to its downfall To its destruction, to my discord When you make your move, You rip everything away from me; you dash all my dreams away. But why should I give up all of my plans? Just cause you show up by me? I will not bow to your demands! I will not cringe when you appear! Because… You You are my… You are my… You are my enemy! No matter how swift my actions No matter how smooth things may go When you appear on the scene everything goes by so fast All my plans are laid to waste Because… You are the one The one who thwarts my every move! Whatever I do, wherever I go You are always there to stop me You are always the one who’s always there! Always one step ahead, always on my trail! I love all the things you hate You hate all the things I love You are the one I hate the most You are the one I must destroy! You are the one who haunts my dreams! The cause of my insomnia The origin of my madness The key to my downfall But whatever you do, Wherever you go I will never give up I will fight on to the end! No matter how many attempts I have to make! I will not bow to your demands! I will not cringe when you appear! Because… You You are my… You are my… You are my enemy! No matter what I want No matter how small it may be You always keep me from it You dash away all my hopes and dreams Because… You are the one The one who thwarts my every move! Whatever I do, wherever I go You are always there to stop me You are always the one who’s always there! Always one step ahead, always on my trail! I love all the things you hate You hate all the things I love You keep me from my one true desire My plot to rule them all Because I am your nemesis And you are mine too You must always play the hero You must always save the day And I know that no matter what I say to you No matter what I offer You will always disagree You must always turn the other cheek No matter how much you want to agree Or make a profit. Because these are our roles in this world They have always been set it stone You will always try to stop me You will always succeed And no matter how many times I try You will always prevail Because… You You are my… You are my… You are my enemy! |
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| Nubi | Apr 26 2009, 05:27 PM Post #2 |
 
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Heroes don't need super powers! Reminds me of PW and Bronnen, minus the hero/villain roles. Very nice. Do you ever put your lyrics to a beat or music? |
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| Pheonix | Apr 26 2009, 09:15 PM Post #3 |
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Thanks I'm still trying to find a song that has the music or beat that would go with this one... |
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| PainWhisper | Apr 26 2009, 10:26 PM Post #4 |
Legend
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What? No. The options would be that either I was the villain and stalked him (which I don't), or I'd be affected by his villainish stalks (which I don't). This is cleary not me. Other than that, the lyrics are actually pretty. |
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| Maelstrom | May 3 2009, 06:03 AM Post #5 |
Tempest
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I especially enjoy that the view is that of the 'villain.' "A villain is never a villain in his own story." He just has a differing perspective. I like it. Let us know when you find some music to put this to. I also suggest finding some music you feel you can to write lyrics to rather than write and grope about for the music. "Melody first my dear, and then the lyrics"- 101 Dalmations. Until then, I consider it a poem in the style of a song. |
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| Rinny | May 3 2009, 02:37 PM Post #6 |
Lost in the dark scary part of my mind
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*Blink* Wow. You just quoted from 101 Dalmations. I don't know whether to grin or be terribly disturbed. But, he's right. I plan out a melody before I write the words. It flows better. Then again, I suck at song writing. ^^ |
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| Chrono T. | May 5 2009, 04:22 AM Post #7 |
Master of Time and Space
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perhaps if you could give me a sampling of how you want the song to sound... like if you sang the words and then hummed the rest of the song... You know, like when you are singing a song by someone who you like to listen to... you will hum when there isn't words and sing when there either isn't a melody or there are finally lyrics again... I have a way of transforming things from there so... perhaps I could give it a shot... |
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