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| The Honorific [Discussion Thread]; The True Story of the Universe | |
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| Topic Started: Apr 28 2008, 02:17 PM (634 Views) | |
| Chrono T. | May 8 2009, 12:53 PM Post #61 |
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thanks to my new english teacher, subtle is lost to me... *sigh* Now I seem kinda less cryptic. I was just trying to get Anomaly to shut the hell up really... |
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| Anomaly | May 8 2009, 01:14 PM Post #62 |
 
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I made 1 (one) comment about it. So yeah, that's not really much of an excuse for your writing style sucking. Learn to admit your mistakes to yourself. If you don't like what you've written don't blame it on someone else. Nice try, though ;) Take your time writing the story. Write one part, leave it alone for a day, then read it again and adjust it until your satisfied with what you've got. No ones rushing you or demanding updates asap. - Except maybe PW when she reads my post claiming that no one is demanding updates asap. :p - This is YOUR story. It's a great concept, no need to rush it and ruin it. Edited by Anomaly, May 8 2009, 01:14 PM.
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| Chrono T. | May 9 2009, 02:33 AM Post #63 |
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wow... now that I am reading it, it sounds even worse than what I had thought... yeesh... I'll rewrite it later, but for now, I am blanking that post... |
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| PainWhisper | May 9 2009, 01:38 PM Post #64 |
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Hey Chorno, don't rush your story. It's a great concept, so there's no need to ruin it. Besides, there's no one demanding updates asap, so you can take your time. If you feel like it, write a part, and read it again the next day, and then adjust it so that you like what you have. Oh and, please, don't blame other people. It was your mistake really, for rushing it. Admit your mistakes, and improve from there. Nice try, though ;) |
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| Chrono T. | May 9 2009, 09:15 PM Post #65 |
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oh, I knew it was my fault... blaming Anomaly is just so much more fun b_happy |
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| SonicSoulstrike | May 9 2009, 09:34 PM Post #66 |
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Lol, he can actually CAN reasonably blame some part of it on his teacher. I know that depending on what I'm reading, if I'm really into it, my speech and writing style ends up mirroring the author's style. Also, I somehow absorbed a southern accent when I went to basic training in georgia. But like I said, that's only partial. And don't blank your post. keep it, and use it as the template for your story to revise later. I was glad that you added something new though. I'd been wondering when it would happen. |
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